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Lamhe · 07-22-2008, 11:29 AM

<div align=\'center\'>Kal Raat Bazam Mein jo Milla Gulbadan Saa Tha
Khushboo Say Uss kay Lafaz Thai Chehra Chaman Sa Tha

Daikha Ussay Tu Bool Paray Uss Kay Khud o Khaal
Poocha Ussay Tu Chup sa raha, Kam Sukhan Sa tha

Tunhaiyoon Kee Rutt Mein Bhi Lag'ta Tha Mut'mayeen
WOh Shakhas Apni Zaat Mein Ik Anjuman Sa Tha

SOocha Ussay Tu Mein Kaiee Rungoon mein Khoo Gaya
Alam Tamaam Uss Kay Haseen Payr'han Saa Tha

Jo Shaakh Shaakh Thee woh Ussi Kay Laboon See Thi
Jo Phool Khil Gaya Tha Woh Ussi Kay Dehan Saa Tha

Woh Sadgi Pehan Kay Bhi Dil Mein Utar Gaya
Uss Ke Har Ik Ada Mein Ajab Bhoolpan Saa Tha

Asaan Samajh Rahay Thai Ussay Shehar e Jaan Kay Loug
Mushkil Tha Iss Qadar Kay Mairay Apnay Fun Sa Tha

Woh Guftagoo Thee Uss Ke, Ussi Kay Liyeah Hee Thee!
Kehnay Ko Youn Tu Mein Bhi Shareek e Sukhan saa Thai

Taray Thai Chandini mein Keh Tuhmat Kay Daagh Thai
Mohsin Kal Asmaan Bhi Mairay Kafaan Sa Tha </div>

Waqar Hussain · 07-22-2008, 02:46 PM

bohaat zabardast lamhee appi app bhi madaan main ahey gahee ji too janab aur koi anay chataa hoo iss race main too humare taraaf say iss ko well come

Lamhe · 07-23-2008, 05:07 AM

Thanks waqar.. mainy socha kyun na main bi try keron…

Bati · 07-23-2008, 11:17 AM

IK PAGAL C LARKI DHOOP MAIN HANS HANS G BEHLAYE
NAACH NA JANAY ANGAN TEHRA, THOKAR KHA KHA JAYE

NARAM NARAM SA BISTAR USKA GARAM GARAM SAY HONT
SHARAM SHARAM SAY MARTI JAYE JAB REEN SAJAYE

YAS KE ANDHYARI NAGRI MAIN AAS KA JOBAN DAIKHO
JAISAY DOOR KHARI EK GORI, GHONGHAT MAIN MUSKAYE

ZAKHAM ZAKHAM MAIN US KE YADAIN, BHOL BHOL K AAYEN
PHOOL PHOOL MAIN US KA CHEHRA APNI CHUB DIKHLAYE

OARH K UJLI DHOP KE CHADAR, CHAND NAGRI KE CHOOREE
DOOR KHARI MUSKAYE GORI, MERAY PASS NA AAYE

urva · 07-23-2008, 03:11 PM

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (LAMHE @ Jul 22 2008, 11:29 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

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Woh Sadgi Pehan Kay Bhi Dil Mein Utar Gaya
Uss Ke Har Ik Ada Mein Ajab Bhoolpan Saa Tha

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buhat khoob sis

rose pari · 07-23-2008, 04:18 PM

<div align=\'center\'>choo jaaye hawa jesay to khushboo teri aaye
jaaty howay ek aesa zakhm mujhy deana

ek dard ka meala sa laga hai dil.o. jaan main
ek rooh ki awaaz ka rasta mujhy deana

ek taaza ghazal azn,e, sukhan maang rahi hai
tum apna mehakta howa leahja mujhy deana

woh mujh say kahin badh k musibat main tha mohsin
reh reh k magar us ka dilaasa mujhy deana,,</div></span>

rose pari · 07-23-2008, 04:38 PM

<div align=\'center\'>ab dastakein day ga to kahan gham.e. aehbaab
main nay to kaha tha k meray dil main raha kar

har waqt ka hansna tujhy barbaad na kar day
tanhaa,e, k lamhoun main kabhi roo bhi liya kar

woh aaj bhi sadyoun ki musaafat pay khara hai
dhoounda tha jisay waqt ki deewaar gira kar</div></span>

mohsin naqvi

Safia Ansari · 07-24-2008, 08:50 AM

very nice Rose jee

Waqar Hussain · 07-28-2008, 11:00 AM

bohaat hee khoob rose bj jawab nahi app ki sharing ka mera vote too app ko pakka hoo gaya

rose pari · 07-31-2008, 11:53 AM

bhai thnx in advance

07-22-2008, 11:29 AM	#21 (permalink)
Lamhe Moderator Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 1,201 Casino cash: $2300 My Mood: Rep Power: 5 Gender: Zodiac: Country:	<div align=\'center\'>Kal Raat Bazam Mein jo Milla Gulbadan Saa Tha Khushboo Say Uss kay Lafaz Thai Chehra Chaman Sa Tha Daikha Ussay Tu Bool Paray Uss Kay Khud o Khaal Poocha Ussay Tu Chup sa raha, Kam Sukhan Sa tha Tunhaiyoon Kee Rutt Mein Bhi Lag'ta Tha Mut'mayeen WOh Shakhas Apni Zaat Mein Ik Anjuman Sa Tha SOocha Ussay Tu Mein Kaiee Rungoon mein Khoo Gaya Alam Tamaam Uss Kay Haseen Payr'han Saa Tha Jo Shaakh Shaakh Thee woh Ussi Kay Laboon See Thi Jo Phool Khil Gaya Tha Woh Ussi Kay Dehan Saa Tha Woh Sadgi Pehan Kay Bhi Dil Mein Utar Gaya Uss Ke Har Ik Ada Mein Ajab Bhoolpan Saa Tha Asaan Samajh Rahay Thai Ussay Shehar e Jaan Kay Loug Mushkil Tha Iss Qadar Kay Mairay Apnay Fun Sa Tha Woh Guftagoo Thee Uss Ke, Ussi Kay Liyeah Hee Thee! Kehnay Ko Youn Tu Mein Bhi Shareek e Sukhan saa Thai Taray Thai Chandini mein Keh Tuhmat Kay Daagh Thai Mohsin Kal Asmaan Bhi Mairay Kafaan Sa Tha </div> __________________

07-22-2008, 02:46 PM	#22 (permalink)
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07-23-2008, 05:07 AM	#23 (permalink)
Lamhe Moderator Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 1,201 Casino cash: $2300 My Mood: Rep Power: 5 Gender: Zodiac: Country:	Thanks waqar.. mainy socha kyun na main bi try keron… __________________

07-23-2008, 11:17 AM	#24 (permalink)
Bati New Friends Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: MULTAN Posts: 22 Casino cash: $256 Rep Power: 0	IK PAGAL C LARKI DHOOP MAIN HANS HANS G BEHLAYE NAACH NA JANAY ANGAN TEHRA, THOKAR KHA KHA JAYE NARAM NARAM SA BISTAR USKA GARAM GARAM SAY HONT SHARAM SHARAM SAY MARTI JAYE JAB REEN SAJAYE YAS KE ANDHYARI NAGRI MAIN AAS KA JOBAN DAIKHO JAISAY DOOR KHARI EK GORI, GHONGHAT MAIN MUSKAYE ZAKHAM ZAKHAM MAIN US KE YADAIN, BHOL BHOL K AAYEN PHOOL PHOOL MAIN US KA CHEHRA APNI CHUB DIKHLAYE OARH K UJLI DHOP KE CHADAR, CHAND NAGRI KE CHOOREE DOOR KHARI MUSKAYE GORI, MERAY PASS NA AAYE __________________ Qamar Mahmood

07-23-2008, 04:18 PM	#26 (permalink)
rose pari Moderator Scart Jump (Level2) Champion! Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1,197 Casino cash: $3278 My Mood: Rep Power: 5 Gender: Zodiac: Country:	<div align=\'center\'>choo jaaye hawa jesay to khushboo teri aaye jaaty howay ek aesa zakhm mujhy deana ek dard ka meala sa laga hai dil.o. jaan main ek rooh ki awaaz ka rasta mujhy deana ek taaza ghazal azn,e, sukhan maang rahi hai tum apna mehakta howa leahja mujhy deana woh mujh say kahin badh k musibat main tha mohsin reh reh k magar us ka dilaasa mujhy deana,,</div></span> __________________

07-23-2008, 04:38 PM	#27 (permalink)
rose pari Moderator Scart Jump (Level2) Champion! Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1,197 Casino cash: $3278 My Mood: Rep Power: 5 Gender: Zodiac: Country:	<div align=\'center\'>ab dastakein day ga to kahan gham.e. aehbaab main nay to kaha tha k meray dil main raha kar har waqt ka hansna tujhy barbaad na kar day tanhaa,e, k lamhoun main kabhi roo bhi liya kar woh aaj bhi sadyoun ki musaafat pay khara hai dhoounda tha jisay waqt ki deewaar gira kar</div></span> mohsin naqvi __________________

07-24-2008, 08:50 AM	#28 (permalink)
Safia Ansari New Friends Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Multan Posts: 287 Casino cash: $276 Rep Power: 4	very nice Rose jee __________________

07-28-2008, 11:00 AM	#29 (permalink)
Waqar Hussain Administrator Tetris Champion! 3D Worm Champion! Miniclip Snake Champion! A-Blast Champion! Super Bean Bag Toss Champion! Alien Dash Champion! Freaky Fun Champion! Space Evader Champion! Fully Loaded Champion! Mac Man Champion! Body Check Champion! Bomb Jack Champion! The Asteroids Champion! Himalayaya Champion! Alien Rescue Champion! 3D Space Skimmer Champion! Yeti Sports 1- Bloody Pingu Champion! Dibblez Memory Champion! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: karachi Posts: 1,161 Casino cash: $1991 My Mood: Rep Power: 10 Gender: Zodiac:	bohaat hee khoob rose bj jawab nahi app ki sharing ka mera vote too app ko pakka hoo gaya __________________

07-31-2008, 11:53 AM	#30 (permalink)
rose pari Moderator Scart Jump (Level2) Champion! Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1,197 Casino cash: $3278 My Mood: Rep Power: 5 Gender: Zodiac: Country:	bhai thnx in advance __________________

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